Hello amazing bloggers!! Hope you all are doing great and having an amazing winter.
This is something I really wanted to share for a long time, but never did until now. Abortion or foeticide is something which is never much talked about and considered a heinous and inhuman act. People hate the very idea of abortion in general and I am no different. So, I’ve come up with this short poem to express my disdain on this. I hope you all will find this worth reading and sharing.
I love to play with knives
a fun thing to do
Especially when I find of lives
That I’ve stabbed you
The red starts to pour
And you start to scream
In the deep of the night hour
You hope this is a dream
No DearChild
It’s not a dream
You are wide awake in the wild
And your eyes now gleam
Now close your eyes DearChild
For now your time’s almost done
Just rest your eyes mild
Trust me, Hell will be fun….
GINGERSHOUTS 
Touching but I found it a bit short. Like I was reading one moment and then it ended. If you can write this poem again and increase the length a bit, it’ll be a more amazing read😊
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Thanks man and yes, I’ll definitely work on its length.
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Well, having had an illegal abortion many years ago in South Africa (the procedure was banned at the time and, as a married woman suffering from prolonged post-natal depression after the birth of my third child, it was the only way to go without all the delays entailed in psychiatric testing) I completely relate to this. It leaves a permanent scar on the soul. Only now can I write about it without crying …
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Your pain and suffering is beyond measure. And yes, the scar it leaves on the soul will never go away. Good to know that now you can share your feelings without shedding tears.
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Realy nobody talks about it….u did a great job…especially tha last line was worth reading…
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Thank you!!
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Amazing..short and really good
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Thank you!!
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Welcome love
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Deep!you have an amazing blog
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed reading through my blog😃
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If you’re going to lengthen it, as Prakhar suggests, you could incorporate Nobomi’s description of the scars it leaves behind, in all its many ways.
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Sure 🙂
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Awww 🙂
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I feel like making abortion illegal will not stop the practice it will just make it more dangerous for the women
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Forceful abortions will only stop when the people responsible for it learn how heinous and inhuman act it is. And also when the see the pain of the mother and feel for her.
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Unfortunately that isnt the case people don’t care about that. If they’re making money from it they will do it. You’re blog actually inspired me to write my own blog post on abortion. Youcan check that out if you like
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Sure, I will🙂
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What a profound way to speak on an issue most would avoid…No words ; just immense sadness and anguish…
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Thanks! That was my way of showing the wrath of the cruel on an unborn innocent. And the sadness is mutual.
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